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I should write some more of my own... don't you think? But that's just how things are. Put your poetry or favorite other person's poetry in a comment and I'll probably put it in a post. Meanwhile, I'll try to come up with something....
posted by LeifEriksson @ 1:15 AM
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3 Comments:
i think it would be lovely to read something of yours. my 'poetry', actually i dont think you can even call it that, is just more like streams of consciousness. i think they are more lyrics actually. but yeah i look forward to seeing what your creativity sparks.
that is not love? i dont know if we were only meant to discuss love, but your words described the act of passionate love making, dont know what could be more appropriate for the subject really :)
the way you write is the style i most enjoy reading, i dont really connect with the rigid rhyming sequences and things sounding so planned... well in some poems anyway. i like it when it just flows freely from the writer.
i enjoy the lines "the pace quickens as our heatbeats follow. we are frantic and needy." i like how you expressed it. frantic and needy.
thats awesome for sharing! i loved reading it, share some more!
dont you mean norweigan?
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